Sad, but nicely done.

I really like the repetition of "and she dances".

Overall, its a rather depressing poem, but I still like it. Well done!

And thanks for your lovely reviews! =)

As already said, you used one poetic device well which was the repeition. But sometimes the rythym seemed a bit off. But nice job, anyway.

I love-love your writing style. Good job.

I liked the repetition of "how she dances", but the general theme of the poem was somewhat cliche.