 Mistress Elena 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Sad, but nicely done. |
 Elphie Thropp 2007-10-03 . chapter 1I really like the repetition of "and she dances".
Overall, its a rather depressing poem, but I still like it. Well done!
And thanks for your lovely reviews! =) |
 Silent Will 2007-04-18 . chapter 1As already said, you used one poetic device well which was the repeition. But sometimes the rythym seemed a bit off. But nice job, anyway. |
 CHIIJOY 2007-02-15 . chapter 1I love-love your writing style. Good job. |
 Lovetress 2006-03-22 . chapter 1I liked the repetition of "how she dances", but the general theme of the poem was somewhat cliche. |