|Reviews for She dances|
| Mistress Elena 12/19/07 . chapter 1
Sad, but nicely done.
| Elphie Thropp 10/3/07 . chapter 1
I really like the repetition of "and she dances".
Overall, its a rather depressing poem, but I still like it. Well done!
And thanks for your lovely reviews! )
| Silent Will 4/18/07 . chapter 1
As already said, you used one poetic device well which was the repeition. But sometimes the rythym seemed a bit off. But nice job, anyway.
| CHIIJOY 2/15/07 . chapter 1
I love-love your writing style. Good job.
| Lovetress 3/22/06 . chapter 1
I liked the repetition of "how she dances", but the general theme of the poem was somewhat cliche.