I love this poem! There is something about it I like; maybe it's the way you worded it. I like everything about it, especially "I saw them walking, desperately wanted to catch up. My last safety was moving away." Great job.

i like this... thanks for your reviews... try this for stanzas... go to the end of a line and HOLD shift while hitting delete... repeat after every line.. if that doesnt work let me know.. i have other tricks

Loved this poem. Very nice work.

Wow...this was very good; I loved the flow. Smooth and delicate. Good work.

Wow. No wonder you told me my poem was cliche. I loved your poem. Maybe I interpreted differently than the point of it, but it made me think of my family, and always being in their shadows. Really nice.