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Reviews For: I Once Knew A BubmleBee

emma
2007-08-07
ch 1,
WHY are your poems so... pointless, surface, lacking. if you want to be a better writer, you have to have a way with words that touches people, that connects with their life.
deathtotal9
2006-03-25
ch 1,
I love your poetry.
Iris Early
2006-03-23
ch 1,
Aww! That makes me smile. I love bumblebees! xx
retailprice
2006-03-23
ch 1,
Yay for new poetry (:

Like so many things, it made me giggle. Mainly the end. 'tis good =D x)bumble.

kisses.
End-of-forever
2006-03-22
ch 1,
he he! I like it...it's funny, and ya, kinda pointless, but lots of poetry is. It's also funny because I have a friend called Mimi... anyway, I liked it.
Drops of Jewpiter
2006-03-22
ch 1,
wow. depressing ending, but nonetheless good. i love how this poem can be light hearted or have a darker side. good job on the repititive use of 'bumbling' it really adds something to the poem. great work :)

~dropsofjewpiter~
Dante's Disciple
2006-03-22
ch 1,
Poor Mimi!!Don't know what you were on when you thought this one up. Made me giggle, well done :-)
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