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| emma 2007-08-07 ch 1, | WHY are your poems so... pointless, surface, lacking. if you want to be a better writer, you have to have a way with words that touches people, that connects with their life. |
| deathtotal9 2006-03-25 ch 1, | I love your poetry. |
| Iris Early 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Aww! That makes me smile. I love bumblebees! xx |
| retailprice 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Yay for new poetry (: Like so many things, it made me giggle. Mainly the end. 'tis good =D x)bumble. kisses. |
| End-of-forever 2006-03-22 ch 1, | he he! I like it...it's funny, and ya, kinda pointless, but lots of poetry is. It's also funny because I have a friend called Mimi... anyway, I liked it. |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-22 ch 1, | wow. depressing ending, but nonetheless good. i love how this poem can be light hearted or have a darker side. good job on the repititive use of 'bumbling' it really adds something to the poem. great work :) ~dropsofjewpiter~ |
| Dante's Disciple 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Poor Mimi!!Don't know what you were on when you thought this one up. Made me giggle, well done :-) |