Those were great. I usually write better when I write darker stuff too. Oh there is a rhyme scheme to them, depending if you're writing a Shakespherian or Italian sonnet, but who cares when your poems are great :) My English class had to do those too. Hard work but still, I like poetry. And I can tell you do too cuz you're so good!

Very nice! Though they don't follow a traditional sonnet format, they are excellent poems, though they're rather dark and melancholy! Oh well, much of the best poetry is born from such motifs. Good job!

Um, I'm sorry, but how are these sonnets? The rhyme scheme should be ABAB, CDCD, EFEF, GG, right?