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| Sweetly Sarcastic 2006-03-28 ch 1,   | it's got great descriptions, but honestly, you could do much better than just a short poem- this could easily be a longerr poem that explains exactly why that sorrow is there, and if the narrator somehow caused it indirectly or directly. it's still good- short and sweet |
| crazy dog events 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Gorgeous. Short and sweet. -pictographic.loe |
| eighteen hundred 2006-03-22 ch 1, | This is cool. I don't usually like metered stuff, I guess is what you'd call this...? Yeah. But this is good, I like it. |