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| Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2006-03-22 ch 1,   | living life (from right side up) I love this line! You get an A+! |
| degenerate elite rabbit 2006-03-22 ch 1, | it has a great rhythm to it, very nice.cheers-rabbit |
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 2006-03-22 ch 1, | Very nicely doen and well written...though I wonder if you didn't mean "hollow" meaning empty...rather than "hallow" meaning holy, in the second line,but very nicely done nonetheless |