Reviews for Smoking kills you know

Reviews For: Smoking kills you know

Loretta Grazie 2007-11-24 ch 1,	abuseI'm taking a pause right now, still digesting the story... It is poignant and so, so sad yet, it somehow speaks beautifully of what love is and what it can do to people... It is beautifully written despite the few grammatical errors... It doesn't matter anyway... Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece... This is one story I will surely remember... Please write more beautiful stories like this... ^_^ also, I hope you update Hellbound again... hehehe...
James E. Clerk 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuseThis is an amazingly touching story. The development of the two main characters is perfect. Yet, in the end, it felt like Lukas had to die... Ever since the first time he had cut himself... Great job.
Crimson Key 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseOMG, this makes me want to cry. You created such a good story especially the conflict between Maion and Lukas. The ending is sad but really fits into the plot.
Fellafunk 2006-04-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is probably one of the most touching stories I have ever read. I like the title too, it really fits. It's really beautiful and I will surely look and read your other stories, 'cause if they are even close to as good as this one, it's truely worth reading. And you can't tell that you're not english
Bra-2 (chibi) 2006-04-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseOMG, how come I haven't reviewed yet! :o i'm such an IDIOT some times. Oh kai-kun! u KNOW how much i utterly adore this story right?, cos it's great, it's so sad yet it's got this really wonderful feeling underneath it. It's interesting and you can tell when you read it that you must really like and feel with the plot line and main chacacter.well done! it's brilliant, now all u have to do is do it again to keep me satisfied XD brill!
Limited Edition 2006-03-25 ch 1,	abuseGeez if he's famous he's gotta have money and he still begs for ciggs from a kid! XDMaion in an angel name! XDSeriously I love how the story goes forward, I love the pace, the mood, the descriptions, but I've probably said that all before."And I looked the other way when I undressed you!” LOL"Your apartment was always large" Since when do apartments change sizes?!Poor dude, all his friends are that boring? I think he needs me!Absolutely beautiful! Damnit, now I want a cigarette too...it's been a whole day since I smoked o.o;Awesome ending! I love it.
Armith-Greenleaf 2006-03-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseAny time sis -bows- Nyan, you know I liked this story. T'was really cute albeit being sad; but that adds it to the whole feeling thing (I made it rhyme XD) I liked Lukas, a shame he had to die, but somehow I saw it coming. He was just going down and down, trying not to show it, to hide it from Maion, never really trusting him... that was his downfall ¬¬ I hope some ppl don't make that mistake. BUT, Lukas had my beerday, I wouldn't do that despite me not trusting my ** on ppl XD Maion did really love him T.T but he had a sort of happy ending, which started like his beginning XD I liked that lots, it was really cute. I told you I just hope he doesn't end like Lukas, but you told me you don't care about that cos the story's over -chuckle- I understand that. Nways me liked! Even though t'was a boy-boy (wah, sis, does really P hafta be a boy for N? T.T) -lol- Imma go to keep singing: PSYCHO GROOPIE COCAINE CRAZY! XD Take care sistah! Best Wishes from Da Big Sis

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