Reviews for Spring, but uncoiled

bleed gilead 2006-04-18 ch 1,	love how you personify spring and the spring/sprung parallel, love the easy way you flow throughout.
mezzie 2006-04-15 ch 1,	you've reminded me that spring is a dangerous season; thank you. write another poem dear, i am looking forward to your words. mezzie
happyfloofbunny7 2006-03-22 ch 1,	u spelled inkongruent wrong lol!1oneoneseriously, we got cheated out of a winter this year, feel free to protest in poetic form. FIGHT THE FLOOF SEASON!- 3.14
Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-22 ch 1,	great poem- you def. have a unique wrting style. i love the line 'but will be drenced in jaundiced yellow' you have some great description in this writing. good job :) ~dropsofjewpiter~