Reviews for Wintertime Jail - FictionPress.com

EnemyWithin 2006-03-22 ch 1,	Ah yes, I hated school as well. "Beatings of pain", huh? Well, I think a few of my teachers wanted to hit me, especially my music teacher. I like the rhythm at the beginning, reminiscent of the torrent of violent weather you describe. I enjoyed this poem, it portrayed the longing for springtime and agony of school very well.P.S. Thank you for your reviews, and I will fix the grammatical errors where you pointed them out (don't think my English teacher even caught those, thanks).
LiveLikeaNomad 2006-03-22 ch 1,	My sentiments exactly.. You really took the words right out of my mouth. The fact that there are no caps makes it that much bleaker. About your review, I'm planning a chapter right now that has her at home. I'm not sure why so much about Biology just came to me.
Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-22 ch 1,	great poem- i can def. relate to it. like in geomerty class. and human geogrpahy. and physical sciecne...etc. i love the line 'the onslaught of terror' i think i'm obsessed w/ the word 'onslaught' awesome writing :) ~dropsofjewpiter~