i like the your word choice (shattered, vivid, star dust).

perfect

Similiar theme to some other things Ive seen from you, but I love it. Especially the first line.

ah, so pretty but so sort of violent...it's gorgeously written, fabulous job.

absolutely gorgeous. enchantingly beautiful, keep writing.

wow vivid. i think this perfectly describes a dream nice work.

I love the line of, "star dust in your eyes." Wow is all I have to say!

xoxo

Vivid. Mystical and wonderfully visual. Great haiku.

pretty pretty.

[pink]

hmm...interesting. I like it.

what a light that would be, star dust?

i think it would be almost a plasma that rips away at you

but it is a metaphor, like us all