|Reviews for dream|
| til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 4/3/06 . chapter 1
i like the your word choice (shattered, vivid, star dust).
| midnight skies are scarlet red 3/27/06 . chapter 1
Similiar theme to some other things Ive seen from you, but I love it. Especially the first line.
| White Tea and Ginger 3/24/06 . chapter 1
ah, so pretty but so sort of violent...it's gorgeously written, fabulous job.
| dark stars grace 3/24/06 . chapter 1
absolutely gorgeous. enchantingly beautiful, keep writing.
| breezy nostrils 3/23/06 . chapter 1
wow vivid. i think this perfectly describes a dream nice work.
| MidnightStar005 3/23/06 . chapter 1
I love the line of, "star dust in your eyes." Wow is all I have to say!
| Moondog Dozier 3/22/06 . chapter 1
Vivid. Mystical and wonderfully visual. Great haiku.
| chaos called creation 3/22/06 . chapter 1
| Vyvyan 3/22/06 . chapter 1
hmm...interesting. I like it.
| Aquafied 3/22/06 . chapter 1
what a light that would be, star dust?
i think it would be almost a plasma that rips away at you
but it is a metaphor, like us all