Reviews for somewhere in between

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beyond.that.horizon 2007-01-12 ch 1,	ohmygod. give me your writing skills, **. seriously, though. i think i forgot how to breathe while reading this. ohmygod. marry me? just kidding. i'm taken and not lesbian. don't worry, though. i still love you.
My New Pen Name 2006-04-25 ch 1,	Exceptionally well-done. It's easy to destroy a subject like this or to just do it badly, but you made it prefect. Excellent imagery. I love it!
dancingintherain 2006-04-10 ch 1,	you creativity is just bursting with gorgeous imagery! your words just really put me there and i get those feelings and see things and feel things...and then at the end you always have that punch that really sends across the emotion and message you wanted to convey- this one was so bittersweet yet so romantic...nice job!
boys kiss girls 2006-04-02 ch 1,	This reminds me of "Anyone lived in a pretty how town" by E.E. Cummings. I liked it, good job.
Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-04-01 ch 1,	Wow...so amazingly lovely.
degenerate elite rabbit 2006-03-28 ch 1,	awesome run through the seasons of romance (thinks of flowers of romance by PiL for a moment) really cool. -rabbit
eighteen hundred 2006-03-28 ch 1,	I like this; the first half-ish especially. It has a good feel to it, it's nice to read. Neat.
mezzie 2006-03-27 ch 1,	SHUTUP i'm so completely jealous of this poem. i want it. you are very very close to provoking me out of unwriteful mental stagnancy.. keep it up : ) gah... and can you shake the boy next to me for me too and tell him to love me?will continue to return for more of this positive mental provocation. thankyou meant most sincerely. mezzie
coldsunlight 2006-03-27 ch 1,	i think i'm in love with this. it reminds me of jets to brazil, i do believe, for some reason. maybe i'm just weird like that. that's a very good thing in my book, by the way. kudos. times two.
Matthew James Current 2006-03-26 ch 1,	You are a unique and wonderful poet. Thank you for sharing yourself with all of us here on FPC. I love this piece and your style. Truly I hope that you respect my work as much as I respect yours. For then I shall know that I have earned the respect of a great poet. I can't really review your work, just bask in its beauty.
Lucid Nonsense 2006-03-25 ch 1,	Beautiful. I love the occasional rhyme, imagery, and how it subtly progressed through the seasons. Great job.
a lonely september 2006-03-24 ch 1,	this is very prettily written. i like it.
Needa S 2006-03-24 ch 1,	Beautiful. Well done. Keep'em coming.
breezy nostrils 2006-03-23 ch 1,	wow so pretty. breathtaking imagery. i can't chose between which lines i liked better - they were all great!
Moondog Dozier 2006-03-23 ch 1,	This evokes a wonderful tenderness in the scenes. The flashes of connection really enhance the whole situation. Excellent descriptions and specific details. Great write.

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