Reviews for She reveals
Choke on this 2/22/07 . chapter 1
quite simple but pretty. hits like a summer breeze
eighteen hundred 3/26/06 . chapter 1
Sweet. Good stuff.
Kentai 3/24/06 . chapter 1
Short, and pretty sweet. Nice...
mizu no kokoro 3/22/06 . chapter 1
very pretty, breezy in a way good work

keep writing!
sunshineofyourlife 3/22/06 . chapter 1
very nice. very nice indeed. its very beautiful actually. sorry if my comments have bogged you down for half the night. i can't wait to read more of your work!

-sunshine ;D