 Inconspicuous Stranger 2009-10-18 . chapter 14Update or I will be forced to inflict bodily harm. =) |
 ZOMGamber 2009-08-28 . chapter 2You know this story reminds me of anime
I can just imagine wraith and philippe as cartoon characters with big eyes and crazy hair, speaking Japanese.
xD |
 Periidot 2009-08-18 . chapter 9hm I am confuzzled O.O I loved it up to here but it seems to have skipped.. i read on to ch 11 and then Flavius arrives and I swear they had already met O_o .. aah well :P |
 Poptart Guava Kid 2009-01-26 . chapter 14:( no more updates? pity
it was a fab story ... |
 JJL 2009-01-22 . chapter 9 I did not really get this ch. It was a big jump from the last |
 Amaya Mina Hikari 2009-01-21 . chapter 13*pokes author repeatedly with a stick* Do you by any chance happen to still be in the realm of the living??
I started reading this story ages ago and then forgot and now found it again. You haven't updated in almost a year!! O_O I hope you haven't died or anything >< This is such a great story and it would be awesome if you'd finish it.
If you're re-writing this, you should post whatever you have, if you have anything. It would be a real shame to see this story die off, it's interesting and it has some really brilliatn ideas. The only thing that I can see that needs a bit of fixing would be not jumping POV's in the chapters or at the beginning of chapters without warning. Like... state when a chapter will be narrated from a different POV, otherwsie it's a little confusing trying to figure out who's speaking unless it's either Phillipe or Wraith. And maybe slowing down the pace of some of the chapters. Other then that, it's great and there's hardly, if any spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes.
I hope that you'll consider continuing with this story, it's very cute, yet serious at the same time and your last chapter included a really big cliffhanger and I have to know what happens.
So, I really hope that you'll consider updating this story again, or maybe even posting a basic outline of what happens. So, you have my best wishes and hope that you'll post something.
~Amaya |
 RaVeN-naILs 2008-07-02 . chapter 14gah! that was may! its july! and i want a new chapter damn it! sorry, i just want to get my point across. please update!
~RaVeN-naILs |
 kirarin242 2008-03-16 . chapter 8good chapter |
 kirarin242 2008-03-16 . chapter 7aww that was sweet of him to give him all that stuff i'm not going to ask bout the thong tho...lol |
 kirarin242 2008-03-16 . chapter 6aw that's sad chapter |
 kirarin242 2008-03-16 . chapter 5aww that's sweet how waaith cares bout him but i still think he's a little crazy in the head... @_@...! |
 kirarin242 2008-03-16 . chapter 3wow...wraith is sounding crazy...@__@ |
 kirarin242 2008-03-14 . chapter 2aw that's so cute wraith just sound so cute XD! |
 kirarin242 2008-03-14 . chapter 1lol in the middle of the road i still love this story it's cute :3!^_^ |
 Kiichigo 2007-08-30 . chapter 1It's amazing how much I love you fiction ! I've been reading at less 4 times... but I think it's kind of sad because you don't upload really often. I like all you others fics, particularly Gangland Dreams. According to me, French Kisses is reaaly interesting cause the subject is hard to deal with but you're doing it wonderfully. I congratulate you for this. Last thing, if you need help with french or informations french canadians, I'm a french canadian from the province of Quebec (we're calling ourselves québécois (masculine) or québécoise (feminine) ) .
Kiichigo ^^
P.S. Thanks for your touching texts. |