Ha! I've been here! I've done that! Just last week in fact... favorite?-

Tin cups and floral pennies,

I was flooded into submission, hands careening carefully;-it just rolls along incredibly.

Colourful and striking. Rather disorientating effect, which I do like.

Awesome, I love the clash of all the adjectives, it really seems to make me see the clutteredness (is that a word? It is now) of the shop. Lovely. Awesome. Cool. Great.

Wonderful end line. This really creates feeling with the motion. Thrift store feeling. Searching through the discards to find a few things that fit wherever. I realize that this is deeper than that, so you've done well with the double meaning. Well written. Well detailed. Excellent write.

my imagination flew 10 yards, only to spark dead.-clever and biting.

ah, the end. so great.

its real, is it?