The ending, well, it doesn't really fit the story. But I overall like it, and it's a nice idea.

Okay. Lyss... Not sure why you hate this thing... cause god damn I loved it, You should listen to Clowie...she knows what's best for you! Anyway, I've never realy been interested in vampire stories do to the fact they all have stereotype vampires and **. This was a good story and I have a weird little fondness for Kaz.

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I actually liked this story -- I mean, I wasn't sure at first... but I think that it was well written. Especially for being written over several months -- I know how that can go and it can be killer. I rather like the part where you say Satan's **. Hehe. Good writing -- keep it up! Cheers! :)

Interesting views on vampires! I liked the inner musings of Liam. Ending wasn't bad, a little abrupt, but not bad by any means.

this is really the ONLY vampire-love story i have ever read and enjoyed. congratulations. i think it's delicious. the ending could be better and you know that, so i won't argue with you. so, so well thought out. such believable characters. fantastic. xx.

Now go put it up on DA.

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I love you x's infinity!

This stroy ** rocks!