Good. Keep Writing!

When is poetry ever *not* strange and rambling? I found it easy to read and understand (something that's all too relevant when it comes to poetry, at least for me); very relatable, which always helps; the repetition is used very very effectively throughout, keeping things interesting and ultimately more memorable; and of course, it has that high-spirited feel-good happy ending. And in the end, aren't those why anyone reads and writes poetry at all? (Seriously the ending's awesome. Having the last line be so terse and apt like that - especially after so much repetition - makes it all the more powerful, at least for me.)

-James