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| Tytherpol 2007-03-24 ch 1,   | Yeah, like you said, it's self-explainatory, but you took a common thought and added beautiful imagery and description. I can really picture a broken girl standing at the sink, staring into the mirror, washing her hands, and crying. And thinking 'Is this right' and all. Good job. ~Sara. |
| Leaving Here 2006-07-10 ch 1, | i love the last 2 lines. awesome!!~Liz |
| Aquafied 2006-03-23 ch 1, | we all would like to forget some things, wouldnt we? i have a gift of being able to remember more than i want to and forgetting important things. interesting |
| Seraph Strike 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Powerful. Excellent descriptive words. I felt the ending of this poem in my gut. Keep writing! |