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| Iris and Appleblossom 2006-04-02 ch 1, | Nicely written. I like the concept a lot - I used to be kind of like that. Not bullied, but I preferred isolation. Then I met a friend who taught me otherwise. :) I really like the ending - it shows how one person can really make a change. Awesomely done. |
| modelicous 2006-03-23 ch 1, | I like it. It's just what people need to do. I wish people would. It's actually pretty fun sitting with 'loners' because they get all confused at why your sitting with them (trust me, i should know, i was one once) and then when they're your friends eventually, They still can't figure out how it happened. DId that make any sense at all? |