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| Lady Alera Van Hexis 2007-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseHi, Thank you for writing for all of those who have made mistakes. I was really shocked by the summery but found a deep way to connect to it. Beautiful and moving as all of your work is. Continue to write my friend... Always, Lady Alera Van Hexis |
| KarlaMarie 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abusethe summery of this scared me more then i can say, and the peom, -was wonderful as always, but equally scary... What have you been doing my friend? i hope you have found your feet... |
| Aurora Barrett 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWow... I can really relate to that. Not much of a rhythm, but perhaps you wanted it that way? Next time try putting some rhythm to the lines and you'd be surprised how much it will add to the piece. }i{ Aurora }i{ |
| Princess-anna57 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseAmazing poem! The last line finishes the poem off perfectly and gorgeously! Good work! *applaudes*,write on! ~Anna~ |