wow! that is amazing!! i love the repetition and the contradictions in it!

you're a really talented writer!! i can relate to this poem alot!

I can't speak...the lines "You hurt you and me and we are strong and we are in pieces" were really strong. The repetition is what really stands out here, and I'm left with this hollow, numb that is of total satisfaction from a piece of work. Great work is all I'm trying to say.

There's so much pain in this one and it gives the reader a feeling of confusion. It is very different from poems I read but it conveys the emotions well.