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| lackluster 2006-03-31 ch 1,  | abusejust as mysterious as bermuda. i like this. |
| crazy dog events 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuse"Yours never left fingerprints for me to cherish like a wound." I absolutely loved this, and I'm so glad you've updated. It seems like forever. -pictographic.love |
| Prevaricate 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseIt's been awhile since I've read a poem that made me feel so thoughtful. A beautiful piece. |
| Spare Change 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. I enjoyed this read, although it's a bit vague for me at first (but it's the vagueness of it that attracts me to it.) |
| Faye Coon 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a sweet and amazing poem. And I'm all for exposing the weaknesses in men and boys...but something so poetically indifferent and subtle like this is just impressive. Or is this more of a men make mistakes and need women thing, or generally just someone else? I'm not so sure but it was vastly apreciated! Could you review some of my work? I'd so love if you would! |
| Haberdasher 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abusethis means all sorts for me, seeing as how i am from bermuda. i wasnt too sure what to expect when i opened this poem up, but safely that it wasnt this. it seems like this bermuda is a person, though im reading into it a bit more just purely because of the title. (government mainly, and sustainable development.. none of which makes any sense i'm sure.) its interesting to see how one word can mean so much isnt it? and how it changes he meaning of something so completely. - Haberdasher |