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| crazy dog events 2006-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseCanaries, maybe? The first few lines (pathetically) made me think of myself. Gorgeous, but it's something I've learned to expect from you. |
| Spare Change 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. The summary intrigued me enough; the poem failed to disappoint. Good job good job! :D (and now I re-read to understand...) |
| Lynn Clarke 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI like the second stanza better than the first. I think there is a little too much packed into a short space in the first stanza, it makes it a bit hard to digest. However, it does give a powerful image. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI love how you started out with the image of this “Bedridden Boy” the notion presents such weakness but the fact that he’s still singing along to our internal monologue as well as strummin’ his guitar makes me think that he’s sick (in the body) but still living through it somehow - it really was a stunning piece. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| Stodaklop 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Not really my stile but it's good none the less.Keep writing.Stodaklop. |