Reviews for My Last Cigarette

unspecified 2007-11-02 ch 1,	:[ this is really sad cries laughs at courtney's comment... but i love it it makes me want to go sit in my emo room...and...and...lol jk jk love it
ShadowFane 2007-05-01 ch 1,	Holy hell...This struck me deep. Very haunting ending. I love this. Great job. SF
je suis une pomme du terre. 2006-04-04 ch 1,	.W.O.W.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-03-23 ch 1,	the message is very powerful and i really like the emotion and fustration felt in the little kid. I reminds me of a kid yellin at their parents while the parent blantely ignores them..very good, i like ;)
Lynn Clarke 2006-03-23 ch 1,	I think this poem has an important and powerful message. However, I think the overuse of exclamations has deadened its power somewhat... I think it would be much more powerful if you toned down the exclamation marks. But overall I think it's a powerful piece. Kudos.