 Faye Coon 2006-03-23 . chapter 1I'm most pleasantly surprised by this poem and it's meaning which is quite evident towards the end. I just wonder how you would recite it. And what bothers me is that you have like three other poems out right now. Don't do that unless you don't want to get review or if you don't want to be respected as a poet. To pubvlish many poems at the same time in a cluster is not proper poetic ediquette- though chances are, you don't care, after all this IS the new generation! You should read tem'd reason of my poems... you'll find my revolutrionary statement! |