This is an interesting piece of writing. I could classify it as poetry...though it seems almost like a conversation from author to reader..i enjoyed your use of words and the imagry you created for me, it was the kind of piece that i wanted to reread, and it wasnt until the third time that i really took everything in, i liked it, so good job!

(ps i would be honoured if you would review some more of my writing!) Great job and keep it up!

I really liked the poem, from beginning to end it's very thought provoking and well written.