wow, this is a really good poem =)yay you updateD1

Love the concept, very beautiful indeed. Your endings are just brilliant.

The format of this poem is really good for the subject of the poem! I enjoyed reading this! ^_^ Good work, keep writing (and thanks for your review!)

~Anna~ ^_^

I like it. The style really worked and brought you into the mindset of the poem.

I amire the formatting choice here, the conscious stream of thought drags the reader in effortlessly. It drips. And the parts in quotation marks are juicy, beautiul choice.

Unique Style, but wonderful.

Thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome work!

--Kait