|Reviews for I can still|
| RuathaWehrling 3/23/06 . chapter 1
Sad little poem, but nice. Watch out for where fictionpress screwed up your formatting at "I can still remember them / even though they’re gone", by the way.
Also, a bit of criticism: I like the way "I can still feel your hand on my shoulder" is longer than "even though it’s gone", in comparison to "I can still see your smile" (etc). It both looks nicer and flows better when I read it aloud. You might consider making all of that type of line longer, if you can extend them without throwing off the meaning or making them awkward. -shrug- Just a suggestion!