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| Isis lives 2006-06-04 ch 1,   | way! nice one! the last lines seemed a little odd because they didn't rhyme when everything else did but no matter! I love the repetition (reminds me of my stuff) and the opposites work really well together. Good work, please keep it up! Keep writing, as always, Isis x |
| Shitsuren 2006-03-23 ch 1, | This is really good, i love that quote and i loved the way you expanded on it, keep up the good work .. |
| Odds In Favor. 2006-03-23 ch 1, | Gah. I knew you wouldn't be able to write something depressive all the way through! Muahahaha. Different style, I like it. ~Snowglobe |