Reviews for Four More days - FictionPress.com

Chai 2008-06-25 ch 1,	well i found this poem to be entertaining at first but it became over repetetive, while i understand this is for the sake of emphasiss it just became a complaint list. the poem feels more it was written for the author than for the audience. well despite this i found it had a good structure and rythm to it said outloud. i still liked it so yay you
lonelywerewolf14 2006-03-23 ch 1,	ha...ha...ha...funny indeed...great..
Smack Granny 2006-03-23 ch 1,	wow! I'm in love with this poem and the way it flows. In some parts the rhyme seemed a little forced, but besides that it is brilliant. also, up the top you said no when i thought it would be know. but hey, poets licence.