oh dear, this, this is just ... i know that im going to read it over and over and put in in my notebooks and cry over it because i have scarce read something like this that just makes me want to be this girl, so that she doesn't. makes me want to write letters, in hopes of a salvation.

Lonliness is really a terrible disease, and i think that you touch on every aspect of that here. i could go on forever about ever line hear, but let me just say that every pasrt of this is goergeous. the lines, the words, the format, its all beauty and pain and eloquence and ressurection. the last htree stazas just tore at me.

cheers, love. vous avez quelque chose tres belle ici. tres applique.

So vivid. Ohmygod, so very vivid. So gorgeous & dazzling.

Oh this was heart-breaking. I loved the line: "His tongue was nothing but a thristy knife, whispering sins disguised as promises." It's ironic how these terrible pains could produce such beautiful poetry. This was very well done, though admittedly, the ending was somewhat disappointing.

This makes my heart bleed .. it's filled with such a sad & lonely finality and god, it just hits so close to home. I love the style of this one - very powerful and very beautiful. I really hope that you're doing okay.. Stay strong..