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| faerygothmama 2006-08-17 ch 1,  | The evocative imagery "trips-up" at the term "angel-face" ; in my visualization. As would most , upon first cognizant thought , I equate the noun "angel" with an ethereal being of light : as opposed to a darkling vampir. Or am I misinterpreting the perspective of the poem , perhaps ? |
| In State of Agony 2006-03-25 ch 1,  | god job, i like it, u achive a powerfull effect...with the format..the stile...kw hope u can reed one of mine...i'm looking for a critic not for "great work!, awesome...reviews" This world is in (State Of Agony) |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-03-24 ch 1, | The last two lines just put a shiver down my spine. This is another well written poem by you. EB |