The evocative imagery "trips-up" at the term "angel-face" ; in my visualization. As would most , upon first cognizant thought , I equate the noun "angel" with an ethereal being of light : as opposed to a darkling vampir. Or am I misinterpreting the perspective of the poem , perhaps ?

god job, i like it, u achive a powerfull effect...with the format..the stile...kw

hope u can reed one of mine...i'm looking for a critic not for "great work!, awesome...reviews"

This world is in (State Of Agony)

The last two lines just put a shiver down my spine. This is another well written poem by you.

EB