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| z 2006-04-27 ch 1,  | wonderful |
| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-04-17 ch 1,  | Very nice. I loved the image w/ the leaves...little side note thothe second line is a little klutsy to me, shouldn't it be "ghost of you"?and "stairs" in the 5th line should be "stares". ^_^thanks for the reviews! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2006-04-09 ch 1, | thats beautiful in a twised way i loved it! and ohh its not a haiku! i know ive been telling u for awhile im not fond of hakius, lol, and wow a piece that isnt one :P |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-04 ch 1, | ghost of your chase me...your sounds weirdyour demons stairs me down...stare very sad and beautifully written.. I love the metaphor awesome piece.. btw stop confusing me with new pennames! |
| shinco 2006-03-31 ch 1, | YAY! You posted this one! I knew you would! ^_~ As I sdaid before, this poem is really good! GO SHAZAAM! |
| TiEka Koniku 2006-03-24 ch 1, | this is interesting. it is a unique way to tell someone you love them.. which works cuz you are unique. hehe. you might wanna check some of the spelling, but otherwise this is a good poem. well done. *TI* |
| FunkyFlower17 2006-03-24 ch 1, | ok...u hav some big explaining to do..where hav u been? u havent posted stuff for like...ages...and plus, i'm still waiting for the review to my poem called 'lucky day 2'. (ok, i know ur thinking, what on earth). u better explain in a nice long review... and brilliant poem...i like the way u create an atmosphere of an 'empty road' in ur poem. the flow is good and overall, great job:-) ~mez~ |
| L0st.S0uL 2006-03-23 ch 1, | i really like this its so deep good job |