Hm, very intresting, and well written. However, not being an anime fan, it was a bit hard for me to understand all the "san" thingies.

One thing: "Normal POV", I believe, is actually, "Third Peron."

Interesting fic. Nice work-and may I compliment your extremely eye catching summary?

I signed in! Okay, I'm a reviewer who demands MORE!

The soft pattering of rain on the roof comes automatically to my mind. It's beauty is refreshed as I read over these words... Excellent, excellent job.

L. Shandow