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| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI can totally feel this one...cold and thick and strained. Very good write! p.s. I love the quote from "The Importance of being Earnest". That is an awesome play... |
| Chemically Induced 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abusei don't know exactly what this is about; i'm a huge fan of definitions, but pyrrhic defeated my knowledge. :( but the imagery here is great. its frantic, its tragic, it's ice-cold and wet. i love it. keep up the great work. ;) love, c.induced. |
| Smoky Bear 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abusestrong and poignant... there's so much depth of sufferring, struggling and dubious triumph within the perfectly crafted short lines... tis mesmerising! |