Reviews for Thy Body To Yours

Oracle of Destiny 2007-10-19 ch 1,	Hehe, I liked this very much.
Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-10-08 ch 1,	I like the imagery, that's very well done. However, be sure to watch your spelling -- it takes away from the power and distracts the reader.
flies.like.decay. 2006-06-09 ch 1,	hmm..were you by any chance..horny when you wrote this? LOL! hehe. nah, im just wondering why every line starts with "thy" i mean, once or twice is cool, but then it seems to get old and a little boring. but you fixed that with the end of each thingymumu!! LOL. i think my useful back button is broken. hes saying, NO, MUST READ. LOL.
hey maria 2006-03-30 ch 1,	The combination of old English and stilted, awkward phrases like "thy mind crazey as hanible lector" makes me wonder if this is just a satire. A satire of what, I don't know, but nevertheless, it made me laugh.
Eye of the Needle 2006-03-29 ch 1,	best example i could find...while this 'poem' repulses me greatly... I had to say something. Please stop butchering old English!!