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| Cait Street 2006-04-04 ch 1, | AWSOMNESS!It made me think of the situation I had with the guy from my poem "The Triangle". Its how I am around him now, I hide my feelings so he can't see the pain. I loved this poem very much. |
| candyaddict 2006-04-04 ch 1, | I loved that line too! the bit about hair. small yet so full of symbolism. twisted words. I love this poem! |
| burning kisses 2006-03-24 ch 1, | omgoodness golly gosharoonie tampa bay ohio state in the running of the president! i love this poem. only everytime i read it, i imagine im you, which makes everthing just right. jk. guess who i like today. lol. "As the strand of hair that ties us together" my absoulute favorite line. amazing. you are an amzingly outstandingly bopper to bobber evil to canevil shitacki mushrooming foot licken genius. keep it up. |
| fairEtales 2006-03-24 ch 1, | Read it at school...I love it! Amazing metaphors. |
| chaos called creation 2006-03-23 ch 1, | i love this so much. and the note possibly even more. |
| Dr. Colleen 2006-03-23 ch 1, | I want to say something that encompasses how deeply I was affected by this poem...but words are failing me...this could be a problem."Good job" will have to do. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-03-23 ch 1, | sigh... loving someone is hard, i can relate to this piece... if only he understands how a girl feels~ lovely work keep writing! |