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| Nathan Ridge 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseI find it thought provoking that you were able to write a poem about something that everyone does yet noone admits...or should I say hides behind a mask? The metaphor comparing life to a masquerade (sp?) ball is probably the best part of this poem. I liked it. Congrats. |
| Mosaic Stains 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abuseQuite interesting... It carries a sort of silent meaning underlined by the words. It also shows the true self that hides behind our many complexed faces, which mask are true feelings. I love your befitting title for this poem. |
| Willow Wildfire 2006-09-07 ch 1, | abuseI Love your poetry... It's so full of emotion. (Sigh) Awesome job once again. And nope, my story isnt a one shot. Thanks for the review! Keep up your great work! ♪Willow Wildfire♪ |
| Obake-chan13 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuseSimply divine! I love it. I didn't catch a rhyme, so I'm assuming there wasn't one. However, a lot of writers can't write a cohesive poem sin-rhyme. You've done it splendidly! |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting.. true about us and I like the bolding.. I might make it into stanzas.. i feel it would help separate the shes.. i got a tad confused at first bc ball and party are so similar.. anyhwo I like the format a lot and the message is great |
| alice is dying 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseLike your name. Um, this is a nice poem, and I like some of the imagery you used. Kepp up the good work. |