ooh I like! It's kind of grpping, and it makes you think a little deeper. For me if someone breaks my trust it is almost impossible to earn back.

one critique (they're) idiots, instead of their idiots.

I'm BACK! Totally deleted all my stories on life support, but then I got inspired and started Avalon Tre all over again!

Happiness and chocolate!

- Arrow's Flight-

Weird question: You are the writer Sean told me about right? otherwise I'm way confused. (Not an unusual thing)

Oh... I like the way you've created this poetic metaphor. Well written; very strong.

Well written, really good poem. Write on!

~Anna~