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| leylakedi 2006-03-23 ch 1,   | wow, great descriptive writing. I really liked it. harmonica = Bob Dylan, perhaps? That's what I was thinking, but it could be somebody else. Again, really great writing. Good job. -L- |
| wodneythewat 2006-03-23 ch 1, | good job on this! you did a great job describing how "he seems oblivious to distractions". :) |