i thought it was good not the best you have done but i have a felling you know that ,but it was good and keep it up

O wow .. that was brilliant *grin* btw tanx for the review .. make sure you keep up all your writting's ^.^

Powerful, something that encapsulates a phoenix, I think. Great descriptions of movement and action, everything flowed nicely.

wow thats awsome! :D loved it keep it up,