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| freedom fire 2006-03-29 ch 1, | i thought it was good not the best you have done but i have a felling you know that ,but it was good and keep it up |
| Shitsuren 2006-03-24 ch 1, | O wow .. that was brilliant *grin* btw tanx for the review .. make sure you keep up all your writting's ^.^ |
| astral boy 2006-03-24 ch 1, | Powerful, something that encapsulates a phoenix, I think. Great descriptions of movement and action, everything flowed nicely. |
| crazy-and-lazy 2006-03-24 ch 1, | wow thats awsome! :D loved it keep it up, |