Have you ever heard that Eagles song, The Last Resort? You should look it up and listen to it sometime. This really...REALLY reminded me of that.

Maybe I'm just strange.

Thankee Sai,

Gaki

This was lovely, how you described everything so well. I need a paradise now, to get away...thank goodness spring break's coming up.

And thanks so much for reviewing my poem. It meant a lot to me :D

Keep writing!

McKenna

what a beautiful poem. so simple, yet elegant and enchanting. wonderful job.

really good! well done.

Wonderful work, I really enjoyed it, keep it up.

Juliet.