This was really good. I liked this alot, because it was unique instead of being about love it was about like which sorta confused me at the beginning.

Nice job, i really liked these lines "You don’t know the feelingOf an unchained melody in your soulOf being able to see right through himwith a single glanceWhen your silence can speaka novel"

The edning was perfect "Like is nice,But juvenile emotionsAre no matchForlove"

Very well down, though the beginning was a bit choppy sounding.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.