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| dV0ID 2007-03-01 ch 1,  | The first was great, but this is wonderful. I'm eagerly awaiting the next one... |
| Casey Drake 2007-01-30 ch 19,  | Wait one moment. I am a complete idjit. Mia. Hermia. Goddess of the hearth, she who serves the gods. Apollo, god of the sun. Artemis, goddess of the moon. Aril... ArES, god of war. Arc... well, that one doesn't correspond to Greek but Arc for Archangel. And since Rai doesn't correspond to Greek either, does that mean that Arc is a Project Aquarius too? :) CD |
| Unwanted Empathy 2007-01-28 ch 1, | I'm a new reader and already I'm hooked! Looks as if its going to be a great read! |
| SapphireIris 2007-01-21 ch 18, | ! Plot twist! Ooh, what'll Apollo say? Is she really dead? Hm... you can't leave me hanging this time. So update please... my sanity depends on it! -SapphireIris |
| For What Its Worth 2007-01-19 ch 18, | Omg... I am speechless. |
| Casey Drake 2007-01-19 ch 18, | AAGH!! NO!! I KILL YOU! YAAR!! *jump-attack* :) CD |
| Anon 2007-01-10 ch 17, | i liked the original but this is even better! |
| For What Its Worth 2007-01-09 ch 17, | Wow. That is a lot to take in. Well, at least the implanted memories give him an idea of normalcy. And yes, the misadventuring superheroes are cute enough to stick around. lol. |
| Rawr 2007-01-08 ch 17, | Wait, is that the end? I definetly like this one much more than the last version. The last version didn't make any sense at all, really. Good job. |
| SapphireIris 2007-01-07 ch 17, | Sorry I haven't reviewed any of your stuff in so long, but I was on a rather extended break. Anyway, last time I saw PO, it was totally different. You've fixed what probably would have been plotholes, and redone a couple of characters. All for the better :) I'm not sure if I like Vampy's new character, but it's way more interesting than the first. And cameos from Arc and Eva? Are they the same people, or different with huge coincidences? Overall, I like. My author alerts don't work at the moment, so if I don't review for awhile, don't feel too bad :) -SapphireIris |
| Casey Drake 2007-01-05 ch 17, | So THAT's how it worked... aha. Mishek is a program?? Somehow I find that REALLY weird. Whoever Rai attacked was a REAL idjit, and deserves a Darwin Award. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2006-12-08 ch 16, | oh goodie, Arty is ok. Ha... Vampy is funny. :) CD |
| Rawr 2006-11-18 ch 15, | Much better than your last version, I'd have to say. Your last version was all over the place. This one is also written much better. Keep up the good work, and I'll forgive you for the seven month cliff-hanger. |
| Casey Drake 2006-10-28 ch 15, | ...There is an unofficial award I give to the worst villains I have ever read. They are called Strangle-Worthy Villains. This one just skyrocketed to Number One Most Strangle-Worthy Villain. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2006-10-28 ch 13, | hmm. Vampire... or perhaps half-vampire. As a full vamp, she'd only be able to take night classes. :) CD |