The first was great, but this is wonderful.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next one...

Wait one moment. I am a complete idjit.

Mia. Hermia. Goddess of the hearth, she who serves the gods. Apollo, god of the sun. Artemis, goddess of the moon. Aril... ArES, god of war. Arc... well, that one doesn't correspond to Greek but Arc for Archangel.

And since Rai doesn't correspond to Greek either, does that mean that Arc is a Project Aquarius too?

:) CD

I'm a new reader and already I'm hooked! Looks as if its going to be a great read!

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Plot twist! Ooh, what'll Apollo say? Is she really dead? Hm... you can't leave me hanging this time. So update please... my sanity depends on it!

-SapphireIris

Omg...


I am speechless.

AAGH!! NO!! I KILL YOU!

YAAR!! *jump-attack*

:) CD

i liked the original but this is even better!

Wow. That is a lot to take in. Well, at least the implanted memories give him an idea of normalcy. And yes, the misadventuring superheroes are cute enough to stick around. lol.

Wait, is that the end?

I definetly like this one much more than the last version. The last version didn't make any sense at all, really. Good job.

Sorry I haven't reviewed any of your stuff in so long, but I was on a rather extended break. Anyway, last time I saw PO, it was totally different. You've fixed what probably would have been plotholes, and redone a couple of characters. All for the better :) I'm not sure if I like Vampy's new character, but it's way more interesting than the first. And cameos from Arc and Eva? Are they the same people, or different with huge coincidences?

Overall, I like. My author alerts don't work at the moment, so if I don't review for awhile, don't feel too bad :)

-SapphireIris

So THAT's how it worked... aha.

Mishek is a program?? Somehow I find that REALLY weird.

Whoever Rai attacked was a REAL idjit, and deserves a Darwin Award.

:) CD

oh goodie, Arty is ok.

Ha... Vampy is funny.

:) CD

Much better than your last version, I'd have to say. Your last version was all over the place. This one is also written much better. Keep up the good work, and I'll forgive you for the seven month cliff-hanger.

...There is an unofficial award I give to the worst villains I have ever read. They are called Strangle-Worthy Villains.

This one just skyrocketed to Number One Most Strangle-Worthy Villain.

:) CD

hmm. Vampire... or perhaps half-vampire. As a full vamp, she'd only be able to take night classes.

:) CD