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| G.L.A.M.O.R.O.U.S.P.U.N.K. 2006-11-27 ch 1,  | abuseWOW I hope I can be 1/2 as good as you this poem left me spechless |
| Leeona Trance 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseIt seems so dark and seductive. I love the repitition of the "idare you:" Amazing; captivating. I must read more. ~LT |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseSo full of emotion, I love it. Great job.Thanks for reviewing my stuff =D~Rowan~ |
| i.am.the.winter 2006-09-13 ch 1, | abusei have very little clue as to what it's about, but the good side to that is that i don't care! haha. good work. especially like the "idare you" lines. good work. and thanks for the reviews. -- devil in a midnight mass |
| luv me like no other 2006-07-19 ch 1, | abuseAmazing piece you have here. A bit disjointed for me, but maybe I'm just missing sumthing. I loved reading this and I especially loved the last line. |
| 364 unbirthdays 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI love this. I really do. Its somewhat 'mysterioius' in an good way, though. I really like how it is so bold and outstanding. I enjoyed this a lot! |
| breezy nostrils 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseinteresting imagery. for some odd reason, i feel like i'm missing something out of this - like references or something. nice work. |
| Wicked Witch Krandomity 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseDark and hectic. Slightly confusing, but I quite liked it. I especially liked how you used "I dare you:..." to help create the mood. Lovely job. Happy Writing--W.W.Krandomity |
| angel953 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseinteresting though it was a different writing style that i have never seen but it's really cool.by the way thanks for the review for my poem Springtime and no unortunately i did not win they said it was to long which made it boring oh well win some lose some |
| goddessofmoondreams 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. You have a very unique writing style. I really liked this poem, very powerful. Keep writing. |
| who-im-bleeding-for 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abusethis is freaking awesome. t has a lot of emotion in so little words. I love it. And when I'm talking about wether his hair was brown or black, he said his hair was black and i said it was brown. we had a small but fun debate about it. |
| skylines 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseYou made me sign in! :O Wow, very forceful poem. I love it. I like it so much that I'm going to add it to my favourites. I especially like the last few lines. About the coffin having to fit somebody. It really makes you want to think. Thanks so much for your review, I didn't really notice all the little errors, and people like you pointing them out helps out quite a bit. Thanks again! |
| burning in effigy 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseWow... angry poem; like how you have the "I dare you:..." lines, brings everything together and kind of like a morbid playfulness (if that makes any sense) Last line was my favorite; made me smile, and I went back to the beginning to read it all over again. Excellent job! |
| A Midsummer Nights Sacrific... 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, just wow amazing lots of emotion so unique. I've never read anything like this, this is awesome... ~Moi~ |
| Sythiro 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat what can I say! |