|Reviews for inclined|
| punctured.lungs 6/21/11 . chapter 1
I was intrigued enough to read this about six times, haha. I don't know why, but I absolutely adore it.
| G.L.A.M.O.R.O.U.S.P.U.N.K 11/27/06 . chapter 1
WOW I hope I can be 1/2 as good as you this poem left me spechless
| Leeona Trance 10/3/06 . chapter 1
It seems so dark and seductive. I love the repitition of the "idare you:" Amazing; captivating. I must read more.
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 9/14/06 . chapter 1
So full of emotion, I love it. Great for reviewing my stuff DRowan
| i.am.the.winter 9/13/06 . chapter 1
i have very little clue as to what it's about, but the good side to that is that i don't care! haha. good work. especially like the "idare you" lines. good work. and thanks for the reviews.
- devil in a midnight mass
| luv me like no other 7/19/06 . chapter 1
Amazing piece you have here. A bit disjointed for me, but maybe I'm just missing sumthing. I loved reading this and I especially loved the last line.
| 364 unbirthdays 6/12/06 . chapter 1
I love this. I really do. Its somewhat 'mysterioius' in an good way, though. I really like how it is so bold and outstanding. I enjoyed this a lot!
| breezy nostrils 6/11/06 . chapter 1
interesting imagery. for some odd reason, i feel like i'm missing something out of this - like references or something. nice work.
| Wicked Witch Krandomity 6/11/06 . chapter 1
Dark and hectic. Slightly confusing, but I quite liked it. I especially liked how you used "I dare you:..." to help create the mood. Lovely job.
| angel953 6/10/06 . chapter 1
interesting though it was a different writing style that i have never seen but it's really the way thanks for the review for my poem Springtime and no unortunately i did not win they said it was to long which made it boring oh well win some lose some
| goddessofmoondreams 6/8/06 . chapter 1
Interesting. You have a very unique writing style. I really liked this poem, very powerful. Keep writing.
| who-im-bleeding-for 6/7/06 . chapter 1
this is freaking awesome. t has a lot of emotion in so little words. I love it. And when I'm talking about wether his hair was brown or black, he said his hair was black and i said it was brown. we had a small but fun debate about it.
| skylines 6/6/06 . chapter 1
You made me sign in! :O Wow, very forceful poem. I love it. I like it so much that I'm going to add it to my favourites. I especially like the last few lines. About the coffin having to fit somebody. It really makes you want to think. Thanks so much for your review, I didn't really notice all the little errors, and people like you pointing them out helps out quite a bit. Thanks again!
| burning in effigy 6/5/06 . chapter 1
Wow... angry poem; like how you have the "I dare you:..." lines, brings everything together and kind of like a morbid playfulness (if that makes any sense)
Last line was my favorite; made me smile, and I went back to the beginning to read it all over again.
| A Midsummer Nights Sacrifice 6/5/06 . chapter 1
Wow, just wow amazing lots of emotion so unique. I've never read anything like this, this is awesome...