I was intrigued enough to read this about six times, haha. I don't know why, but I absolutely adore it.

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WOW I hope I can be 1/2 as good as you this poem left me spechless

It seems so dark and seductive. I love the repitition of the "idare you:" Amazing; captivating. I must read more.

LT

So full of emotion, I love it. Great for reviewing my stuff DRowan

i have very little clue as to what it's about, but the good side to that is that i don't care! haha. good work. especially like the "idare you" lines. good work. and thanks for the reviews.

- devil in a midnight mass

Amazing piece you have here. A bit disjointed for me, but maybe I'm just missing sumthing. I loved reading this and I especially loved the last line.

I love this. I really do. Its somewhat 'mysterioius' in an good way, though. I really like how it is so bold and outstanding. I enjoyed this a lot!

interesting imagery. for some odd reason, i feel like i'm missing something out of this - like references or something. nice work.

Dark and hectic. Slightly confusing, but I quite liked it. I especially liked how you used "I dare you:..." to help create the mood. Lovely job.

Happy Writing-W.

interesting though it was a different writing style that i have never seen but it's really the way thanks for the review for my poem Springtime and no unortunately i did not win they said it was to long which made it boring oh well win some lose some

Interesting. You have a very unique writing style. I really liked this poem, very powerful. Keep writing.

this is freaking awesome. t has a lot of emotion in so little words. I love it. And when I'm talking about wether his hair was brown or black, he said his hair was black and i said it was brown. we had a small but fun debate about it.

You made me sign in! :O Wow, very forceful poem. I love it. I like it so much that I'm going to add it to my favourites. I especially like the last few lines. About the coffin having to fit somebody. It really makes you want to think. Thanks so much for your review, I didn't really notice all the little errors, and people like you pointing them out helps out quite a bit. Thanks again!

Wow... angry poem; like how you have the "I dare you:..." lines, brings everything together and kind of like a morbid playfulness (if that makes any sense)

Last line was my favorite; made me smile, and I went back to the beginning to read it all over again.

Excellent job!

Wow, just wow amazing lots of emotion so unique. I've never read anything like this, this is awesome...

Moi