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| A-wolf-called-Skya 2007-07-10 ch 1,   | omg O.O... Are you writing about me? that was so creepy till you said some stuff i don't do or say or act like XD i thought i had a stalker for a min! I am:But you certainly wouldn’t call her a wimp. To find her you’d just have to look Into a back corner were she’s reading a book. She is very outspoken and very kind, But I’m not sure if she truly has a mind. and... Her eyes are the color of brown gooey ick. She’s taller that most, I tell you it’s fine, Her height right now is just five feet nine! She sings in the chorus, just ask Hannah. She really doesn’t like eating a banana. Her shoe size is twelve and that’s really sad, Whenever she shoe shops she gets really mad. Sometimes she’s happy and sometimes she’s grumpy These nerds that she’s eating are really quite lumpy. Her mood tends to swing in a quite random manner. She is truly not a very good planner. The things she likes to do are a bit odd. She doesn’t know anyone with the first name of Todd. She hates to talk in front of a crowd, When she does she tends to speak rather loud. She loves to eat, but is as thin as a rake. Especially things that are sweet like chocolate silk cake - we are twins! give your secret twin a big hug! :D -hug- anyways... Have you tried your hand at freewrite poems? you may have some luck with that. to this day i still prefer them. you can just do so many neat things with them. I don't think this was bad. it did sound a bit strained in some areas though, but still...i know way worse, trust me. I was going back through reviews on DS and i noticed yours and remembered you, so i thought i better let you know i'm Doing more work on DS finally (Dangerous skies). I'm rewriting right now. i have the first 4 posted, and they are a ton different than before. no 3 blonde idiots on tiny bikes, no super immaturity, Dranny comes in in chapter two, yup...plus, no school. its civil war. its grown up. I hope you like it if you check it out! And where are all your stories? i thought you had more when i checked before i died for the last year :/ good writing! ;) (get more) -Rachel. ;) |
| Band Geek17 2006-03-24 ch 1, | Yay, Humanities projects! They bring out the best in us!... Well, they bring out US, at least... =P I love it. Brilliant. |