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| An Inside Joke 2006-03-24 ch 1,   | I didn't pick up for a long time that hte narrator was a toy and not a real dog. Maybe at the opening describe being wrapped up in a box or something to clue in the readers that its a toy. Also watch the break-up of paragraphs, as a lot of times a new paragraph starts halfway through a sentence. |