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| Needa S 2006-03-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat word usage. Awesome write. |
| Lana Mira Beth 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI admire your optimism and I think you have great skill and potential. Just remember that Cat Stevens song: Wild World. Just remember there's a lot of bad everywhere. However, good job. :) |
| guns-blood-n-tulips 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseInteresting imagery, but the repetiveness does lose it's interest very quickly. I would also like to applaud you on your optimistic world view. Continue writing!Hope you can keep that outlook. |