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| heeless8 2008-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseYou're such an amazing writer. It seems so easy for you to depict what the character is feeling. I absolutely love this story and keep up the good work! (: - heeless8 |
| SilverTwilight 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThat was so moving. I think for the length that it is, it's very well-written. However, you could turn it into a better story if you developed the places, feelings, and especially characters a little more. It was hard to keep track of who was who, while names were just thrown out there. Well-done. It's a well-known story but I've never read it in exactly this way before, so good job! ~ Dx |
| Najia 2007-02-25 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely teared up for this - Especially the last line... and when the song in her head changed from I hate Kevin, to I hate KT... |
| DuchessYappingDog 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWah, that made me a bit teary eyed. :[ Sigh... I'm only on Chapter 5 of Snippets. Sigh... they're so cute. I hate Barron already. He seems like a poop head. Anyways, back to Snippets. |
| Jesse the Storyteller 2006-04-16 ch 1, | abuseNever before in my life have I cried over something I read on this site. That was one awesome piece of writing... very chicken-soup-for-the-soul-esque... =P I'm a baby. I cried. Keep up the awesome work. If everything you write is as good as this, then you're amazing. I'll have to read more of it later. ^.^ |
| my dangerous angel baby 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet. I loved it. Great job! =) |
| WritexMexOut 2006-03-26 ch 1, | abuseAw... its so sad. GAH! It made me cry. I absolutely loved it. |