Interesting piece, but an overused metaphor. I'd like to see you strech and try something new.

this is a very true metaphor- you use a sarcastic voice (to conformity) to display your message- very nice!

i like the comparison, it's true too. Good one!

so often have I written about the same idea...that we are slaves to conformity and the restraints we put on ourselves to be accepted.

great job, and thanks for all the great reviews

+SpiLLeD InK+

Amazing! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^