Guess who? Yes, it just happens to be your most favorite person in the world, coming over to read your soon-to-be awesome and fully developed story once The Eighth Adept gets finished. Bwahaha! I'm here to leave feedback. Yes, it's a terrible thing.

*Clears throat.*

HA! This is awesome. And old nun kicking a guy's **. Hilarious ;p.

The whole thing with this guy and the Bringer of Fire and Kristina? Very confusing. I think more of an explanatory introductory chapter is in order to ease the reader through the complicated plotline. You probably very much disagree with me, but that's my personal opinion. And who is this Perry Webbs? Hmm?

-McQuinn

PS - May we talk about this story when you have the time?

What happens to this man (Perry Webbs, I assume) while the women are talking. Is he just sitting there; why don't the women do away with him?

Freeaky.

*glares at spam-reviewers* uh... Bris? Who's Brendan?? That's not your name. I would know.

ANYway... coolness.

:) CD